Please revise the short pargarph its urgent thank you so much :)?

Mr. Russall: conservative, witty, grey hair, crafty, short, and confident.

-Mr. Russall has stolen money from the elderly a number of times at the bus stop because they put down their purses on the ground and have a conversation with their friends while waiting.

-When people are taking a nap on subway, Mr. Russall secretly takes away their wallets from their pockets.

-lives in darkness. He always moves to house to house every day in order to avert the police閳ユ獨 eyes.椋?br> -doesn閳ユ獩 want to be arrested on the surface, but deep down inside he knows he must be punished because he has done serious crimes in the past.

Please revise the short pargarph its urgent thank you so much :)?

-Mr. Russall has stolen money from elderly people at the bus stop on several occasions. They sometimes lay purses on the ground and are distracted by conversation with acquaintences.

-As people nap on the subway, Mr. Russall secretly takes away wallets.

-Living in darkness, he moves from house to house in order to avert the police閳ユ獨 eyes.椋?br> -Unconscious of his desire to be arrested, deep down inside he knows he must be punished because of his serious crimes.

Hope this helps. It's less wordy. Good luck. Edit: The person below me is right. It was a typo I didn't catch. Sorry.

Please revise the short pargarph its urgent thank you so much :)?

Hello.

mrsrm seems to have given you a shorter version. I vvould change one thing though. I vvould change "He alvvays moves to house to house ever day in order to avert the police's eyes." into "He alvvays mover *from* house to house..."

Hope that helps. Take care.